Feedback from draft

Each group showed their draft cut to the class in lesson, and we all gave each other feedback. The feedback for our draft thriller opening was as follows:
Positive comments:
-Good camera angles/ shots
-The punch looks good
-Easy to understand what is happening

Negative feedback:
-It is not a thriller
-The sound is not very good

We discussed the feedback that we received and we thought that people said that our sound was not good because we have not finished editing, and have not yet put the music with the clip, so when we are finished, the sound will not be a problem. We also thought about the the criticism that it was not a thriller. But we still think it is because our thriller opening, as it is an opening to a crime thriller, concentrating on the fear fear of crime amongst youths. We thought that people may have not categorized ours as a thriller as the rest of our class are all doing different types of thrillers (such as psychological thrillers).
Here are the posters to two different types of thriller, a psychological thriller, which many people chose to do, and a crime thriller, like ours:


Just from looking at the two posters, we can tell how different the two types of films.